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“Title:
Can you think of a system of weeding out and/or committing psychiatrists and judges if they need to be?

Detail:
If I am searching for psychiatrist, I can’t pick
this one for sure, if he decided to go into private practice. Why? Because it makes sense to him to let Turcotte out even though he practically says “No I don’t want you to look into my head” by refusing treatment. And even though he can see doesn’t want to pay for his crime, even though he practically says that his children have no value since he just wants to live life like he did nothing, this doctor says he is safe to get out.
So is there a weeding out of psychiatrists (outside their own associations) and judges who obviously lost it, anywhere in the world?

Topics:
Psychiatrists, justice, mental institutions, law, courts, killers, judges,

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