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Can you help me with this sentence?
Asked by JLeslie (65417)
June 2nd, 2012
I have tried to write it two ways. Which do you like better? Feel free to suggest another option.
Choice one:
There were typically two options regarding lodging. Option one: stay in a hotel near the track, which many times was not the best in lodging and the restaurants nearby had something to be desired. Option two: stay closer to civilization, and have a longer trip to the track in the morning.
Choice two:
There were typically two options regarding lodging: stay in a hotel near the track, which many times was not the best in lodging and the restaurants nearby had something to be desired; or, stay closer to civilization, and have a longer trip to the track in the morning.
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