Can someone compare my old resume to my updated resume?

Several months ago I asked for help on my resume. I entered my information to my school for tips on revising my resume. I plan to try to get into a HR/Administrative field.

I have mixed feelings about the “Objective”. Should I leave that out or in? Should I put in a summary of what I’ve done? I hear about “writing a story” with your resume but I’m not sure how to.

Here’s my OLD resume
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B_rbCFqPRJ5XVWdWbkN2cXNlWUU/edit

Updated
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B_rbCFqPRJ5XdkF4RHJEV01sODA/edit