Help with sentence clarity?
Here’s the sentence.
The novel does not simply state that fate or Henchard’s own choices are the results of his own downfall; instead the author’s feelings are shown through other characters around Henchard in Casterbridge.
I feel like that isn’t a very clear sentence… is it a run-on sentence? I honestly can’t tell. I’ve gone through my MLA handbook and the guidelines, and I haven’t found anything.
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