I wrote this one, could anyone check my grammar?

Lastly, Human resources is in charge in of administering employees’

of each employee

to have a sincere working experience for everyone. I do not know what you mean by that. You might want to reformulate this.

“Lastly, Human resources is in charge in administering employee’s ”
“Lastly, Human resources is in of charge in administering employees’ ”

Should be “human resources is in charge of administering etc

@ccrow
i already corrected my post

@ragingloli Sorry, you hadn’t yet when I posted mine.

One of Human Resources’ main duties is to facilitate the needs of the employees.

It establishes a peaceful and fair working environment for the employees in order to have encourage a more productive outcome. <- (I don’t like the final part of this sentence, but can’t really work out what you mean)

Secondly, Human Resources monitors competency of employees employee competence, making sure ensuring that they reach meet the standards of what the company is asking set by the company: Professionalism, proficiency and right good/appropriate conduct.

Lastly, Human Resources is in charge in responsible for administering employee ’s benefits such as medical benefits (can’t think of an alternative) and insurance.

Human Resources has to do its part Human Resources works for the betterment of the company . It is said to be the main core when it comes to of management ; however, as an individual employee, it is still the duty of each individual employee s to -do their part to have to contribute to a sincere working experience for everyone.

@the100thmonkey, is my english that bad? thanks for the edit. I even liked what I wrote better when you editted it.

@unodos – I’m an ESL teacher in a big university city in Scotland; I do a lot of proofreading.

I wouldn’t say your English is bad – your grammar is good, but there are some problems with word choice – most of the strikeouts I used were to replace a word with one in a higher register – make sure Vs. ensure, for example.

most of the strikeouts I used were to replace a word with one in a higher register – make sure Vs. ensure, for example. <<<< I didnt understand this last part

Shorten first sentence, also. HR’s primary goal is to facilitate the needs of the employees.

Then you have parallel construction when you say, “Second.” and “Last.”

Edit “editted” to “edited.” See where you have duplicated phrases such as “do its part” and “do their part.” Learn what a run-on sentence is, should I have used a period there instead of a comma?