(Honest opinion) What are your thoughts on this bit of writing?

Do you think that it’s any good?

On a Tuesday night, during the sticky, sweltering month of August, a young woman sits alone on a vast, rocky, cedar-lined expanse of beach in northern Michigan. She is gazing upward into the northwestern sky, watching billions of atmospheric atoms smash and collide with the wild energetic electrons of the solar wind and erupt in their red and green dance of orgasmic release above the dark waters of Lake Michigan. As she watches the tiny travelers from the Sun make love to the outermost inhabitants of the Earth in glorious auroral ecstasy, she is thinking about a girl.

It’s not mine.