Grammatical help with a paper, any takers?

This is way more personal then I usually get on Fluther, but… I’ve had two days to work on this, and it must be turned in tonight. Yikes.

My grasp on grammar is weak, as a poet I splice commas like it’s my job. I missed out on grammar in grade school and middle school and I skipped high school. I am no advanced grammarian. This is a mediocre paper. Please help me out here.

My paper is on the depiction of wolves and werewolves in two readings, Angela Carter’s Wolf-Alice and A Case of Lycanthropy by Harvey Rostenstock, M.D. and Kenneth R. Vincent, Ed.D.

This is a research paper, for my class ENG 464: Forms & Genres The Cultured Beast: Animals in Literature and Art. If you can help, here it is in googledoc form, and you can highlight /highlight and correct any grammatical issues you see, in particular commas use. I am not concerned with the spelling, but any other proofreading would be invaluable to me. Feel free to add notes and thoughts regarding the paper.

I don’t need a committee, but if one or two of your fine Jellies could lend a hand I would be very grateful.

By the way it is 10 DS.