Approve this email before I send to a coworker? Thanks?

My tired eyes may not have the best judgment…

To give some background this is being sent from one 23 year old to another with a fairly friendly relationship. Be honest with feedback but not scathing. Thanks!

Hi *****,

I received your email on my ***** at about 11pm but now I can’t seem find it. Clumsy fingers I suppose…Your attentiveness to my growth at *** is helpful and I thank you for helping me adjust to my responsibilities.

Of course, you can always tell me if a task isn’t up to par. I’m not as sensitive as I may seem and I appreciate honest feedback.

You also don’t necessarily need to tell me “good job” every time I follow through with something successfully—it’s my job to do things right, and if I tell you that I completed a task it’s not to elicit praise but to update you.

Moving forward, I’ll be more communicative about ****** needs and consult with ***** and ******** about what they need (as well as the rest of the team) before I consider the task complete. Tomorrow I’ll order what you detailed in your message.

Email is admittedly not my favorite means of communication but it’s a necessary evil at this hour. If you would like to chat about this or anything, you can also approach me whenever is convenient for you. I’m rarely too busy for that. :)

Thank you,
**

Also,
Let me know if you got to the ****** *******. It’s hot on my lists of to-dos tomorrow right ahead of ******** and ******** **********. Thanks!
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