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What constitutes a poem?

Asked by the_state_of_wisconsin (351points) November 9th, 2010

wrote this poem, want to talk about it.
process was…

-wikipedia search “ultraman”
-copy article on “spacium ray”
-feed into google.translate
-change language…(again and again)
-alter structure/some wording
-translate again and again
-decide its finished.

here is the poem. (right now called “ultraman”)
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A man crouches,
Right thumb on his face
(This fools his competitors).

This means death.
(There is a possibility of explosion or fire.)

Meditation: he sees himself.
(However great the intensity, the reflection is lost)

Refusal of the energy may be fatal.

Spacious facts:
“I found an article on the surface of Mars”

Death must be based on the essence of energy.
And is perhaps the only effective weapon

And to this,
Very few are immune.
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question: what makes a poem?

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