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Asked by Pandora (32211points) April 4th, 2012

Ok, so someone found an article they thought was very moving and I did not find it so moving as they did. All I could see was a poorly written essay. As I read it all I could think was the a 15 year old was writing like a 10 year old. I understand he was writing from his emotions but I found I couldn’t help wonder if his conflict was the cause of the poor grammar or was is it a lack of education.
The person who sent me the story wants to know what I think. What would you say?

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