Care to throw tomatoes at my content marketing?

I’ve been trying to get my little content marketing / copywriting service website going, but I haven’t been able to get a lot of feedback on the articles.

Anyone care to read my latest article and tell me what they think. Feel free to be blunt, but try to add some good ol’ constructive criticism too.

My article has to do wiht the Godfather (yes, Don Corleone), and it’s a short read:

http://www.hirejose.com/godfather-content-marketing-role-model/

Please lemme know what you think =)