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This is a simple but meaningful website that you can easily send greetings to your friends. The desiner suitablly uses color and 3D modle that has cute carttons. Traditionally, we Chinese have been used to send the cards by buying paper cards, but in the web, because of the suitable usage of color and 3D, I am really curious to play the 3D model that is active when you move your mouse, and tend to send cards to one of my friends.

Color is an imortant factor that decides whether browsers want to browse it further. At the beginning of clicking the web, there is a content loading. The designer employs short sentences and pink color as a mian color to direct users, so that the browsers can pay more attention to browse further.

3D model is another shining point that hooks browser’s attention. In my experience, when I first watch this web, the model absorbs my mind, which I do want to play it and send it to my friends.

Making fantastic webpage does not acquire many great information included, it only involves simple color or fun idea, which could more powerful communication to browsers such as the website.