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Is the prologue of my story interesting enough?

Asked by PixieGirl98 (74points) July 1st, 2016

Does the prologue of my story draw you in? Any tips or pointers?

Prologue

There was a moment I believed I could feel something more. Like I would care if I took away her smile or his laugh. Like I would be bothered by his sudden change in personality or lack thereof. The more the industry boomed, the more the idea blossomed inside of me; like a flower sprouting from the dirt. It grew and grew, possessing my soul. How beautiful it was. Just like her.

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