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Need a Topic Sentence for this Thesis Statement?

Asked by bloosom (1points) February 25th, 2011

The Demise of my Grandmother made me a stronger person because I was shelted. The demise als o helped me deal with loss as well as how to value people.

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The demise of my grandmother me a stronger person because I was sheltered. It helped me deal with loss. And it made me value other people.

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