Graphic designers, help! Can someone help me with my design for my high school graduation?

Okay so since I have a bit of experience with graphic design and am known for it at my school I was asked to make a design for the graduation sweaters for my high school grade. I have been working towards the idea of a crest, to give that ‘university’ feel I guess but I know something is missing.

Here’s a screenshot of what I have so far. I think its okay but I want it to be great since it’s for my whole grade. I’ve been going crazy because I don’t think it’s as good as it could be. I have to use the eagle since it’s their mascot and the colors red and gold. I’m trying to get it like ‘simply traditional’ with a touch of modernism. If anyone can help me out with any creative ways of doing this I would really appreciate it! Thanks

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