Will you help me condense this down to 2 paragraphs?

Part of the application process for the tutoring program asks for “Free Response.” They gave an example of Free Response here, so I wrote one up loosely based on that.

Here is what I have:
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“My love of teaching comes from my love of learning. As magna cum laude graduate, with a bachelor’s degree in Education, I know that hard work and dedication to learning leads to success. I look forward to helping students find a direction in life that will lead to fulfilling, satisfying careers.

I have taught all subjects, in all grades, from pre-school to 12th grade, since 1993. Most recently I taught in an adult high school diploma completion program, helping adults, who, for whatever reason, didn’t graduate from high school. I worked closely with the students, both in person and online, to help them fulfill the credit requirements to graduate from one of our participating high schools.

I am creative and I go that extra mile to flesh out a lesson to show the relevance of it in my student’s lives. Or we may go the extra mile just because it’s interesting.

I have a special focus on personal computer literacy, and will incorporate lessons that will require exercises in Word, Excel, Power Point, and Paint.

I hold myself to a high standard and will ask for, and welcome, any feedback and suggestions.

I try to be flexible with time. While I do have a 24 hour cancellation policy, I offer makeup classes.

I look forward to hearing from you and helping you achieve success in your studies!
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Then, further down they provide the field to put this in, but says:

The free response section is your chance to stand out. Be descriptive, be thorough, and be yourself as you tell potential students and parents about your relevant qualifications, experience, and tutoring methods. Please note that we require this section to be two paragraphs in length and will not accept submissions written in ALL CAPS or in resume format.”

How can I be descriptive, thorough and myself in 2 paragraphs?