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Is this sentence grammatically correct?

Asked by ZoeDecker (151points) March 7th, 2016

Shows at the Hastings Theatre draw from various eras of history, which is the epitome of a comprehensive form of entertainment.

Maybe the one below sounds better because it’s less wordy?

Shows at the Hastings Theatre draw from various eras of history, the epitome of a comprehensive form of entertainment.

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