Doing English practice. Asking native people for help.

The following sentences are made by myself. But, I don’t know if are they correct and fluent when the native people read them. So, if you find something wrong, pls leave a comment and tell me. thx a lot! Have a good day!

1, we are the successor of communism.

2, please bathe your hands before you eat dinner.

3, the rock-music band, Beetles, was very famous in 1950s.

4, persistance of practicing little things is the most important step to success, no matter how trivial the things are.

5,the way to make this food is to heap up the charcoal, and put the chicken that was flavored already into the heap of charcoal.

6, Indians, the original inhabitants of America, once dwelled in Asia in long time ago.

7, the birth of human originated from the story of Adam and Eve who ate an apple secretly in an orchard.

8, the old librarian is a smart prophet who can precisely predict what will happen in the future.

9, the invention of irrigation technology is very useful to the west region where the water is extremely rare and precious.

10,Flu, an infectious disease, can be spread by one people to another people.

11,the company, Riot, became to be the subsidiary of the Tencent company.

12, If you want to do fishing. A slender rob, a fishing reel and a hook are enough .