Help With My Poetry Assignment?

Okay, so I’ve asked these types of questions before and people keep saying “do your own homework” and stuff so I just want yuor opinion and maybe some feedback and suggestions.
So the poem “Stopping By Woods On A Snowy Evening” by Robert Frost, I have to write a parody of it. It has to have the same structure, rhyme scheme, same amount of words, line breaks and so on. Heres my parody of it:
Robbing A Bank On A Snowy Evening

Whose bank this is I don’t know.
It is going to be robbed though;
They will not dare catch me here
I’ll fill my greedy pockets up with dough.
The other people must think it weird
To see me running with fear
Grabbing money from the big safe
They won’t stop me by here.
They sound the alarm and I shake
As if I am going to flake.
The only thing that will keep
Me from falling and caught awake.
Are the people’s screams loud, and deep.
But I have money to keep,
And police to outrun before I sleep,
And police to outrun before I sleep.

By DZG

Okay so if you dont know the poem just google it, I wrote the titile above and if you have any feedback or suggestions please let me know, I really need to do well on this! (btw I am NOT asking you to do my homework for me, I just need feedback so I know if it suck and I should change it or something)
your comments/advice are greatly appreciated!