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Is this paragraph a good description?

Asked by Puputom (34points) July 13th, 2015

This is a simple but meaningful website that you can easily send greetings to your friends. The desiner suitablly uses color and 3D modle that has cute carttons. Traditionally, we Chinese have been used to send the cards by buying paper cards, but in the web, because of the suitable usage of color and 3D, I am really curious to play the 3D model that is active when you move your mouse, and tend to send cards to one of my friends.

Color is an imortant factor that decides whether browsers want to browse it further. At the beginning of clicking the web, there is a content loading. The designer employs short sentences and pink color as a mian color to direct users, so that the browsers can pay more attention to browse further.

3D model is another shining point that hooks browser’s attention. In my experience, when I first watch this web, the model absorbs my mind, which I do want to play it and send it to my friends.

Making fantastic webpage does not acquire many great information included, it only involves simple color or fun idea, which could more powerful communication to browsers such as the website.

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6 Answers

chyna's avatar

That is four paragraphs.

Dutchess_III's avatar

Not sure what the purpose of information is.

Also, spell check, please (carttons, desiner, suitablly, modle, imortant, mian .)

stanleybmanly's avatar

It’s difficult to consider the descriptive aspects, due to the large number of grammatical, spelling and syntax errors. The mistakes are so numerous that it is impossible to appreciate whatever message may be contained in the “description” The reader is forced to in effect “translate” the message.

marinelife's avatar

Oh, dear, the English is not good.

flutherother's avatar

I get the general idea but the English is very bad. If no effort has been taken to get the language right why should I have confidence in the product. Even a fantastic product is tainted by this poorly written description.

stanleybmanly's avatar

This is written by someone whose native language isn’t English

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