Are there any writers here on Fluther?

I have some problem with my book. I need some feedback for it. I have unsuccessfully found a suitable critique site, some want me to critique a limited number to get enough points before I can post anything (kind of like Y!A), some don’t accept first drafts… So I think I have to turn to the collective.

Could you help me a bit? You don’t have to be a writer, just someone who is interested enough to help.