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Can someone correct my short essay grammatically?

Asked by dopeguru (1928points) December 11th, 2014

English is my third language and I’m having difficulties. Would love some help!

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FireMadeFlesh's avatar

I won’t correct it for you, especially if it is for academic assessment, but I’d be happy to take a look and point out issues and offer guidance. PM me if you’re interested.

FireMadeFlesh (16593points)“Great Answer” (3points) Flag as…
jca's avatar

i will help you. Where is the essay?

jca (36062points)“Great Answer” (1points) Flag as…
Mimishu1995's avatar

You can PM me too.

Mimishu1995 (23628points)“Great Answer” (0points) Flag as…
dxs's avatar

PM me, I love grammar!

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Strauss's avatar

I will also take a look at it. PM me.

Strauss (23624points)“Great Answer” (0points) Flag as…
Dutchess_III's avatar

Did he/she ever follow up?

Dutchess_III (46812points)“Great Answer” (2points) Flag as…
ZEPHYRA's avatar

Calling @dopeguru where is that essay? You still writing it?

ZEPHYRA (21750points)“Great Answer” (1points) Flag as…
jca's avatar

He pm’d it to me and I corrected it.

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