My short story competition entry, "Among the stars", had not been reviewed. May I have some constructive critisism, and possible editing?
Asked by beatthelastboss (286 ) October 13th, 2009
Thank you very much. Keep in mind this is for a high school short story competition. Was anything too heavy? Too light? Thanks in advance.
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