Would you please give me any suggestions about my website?

This webpage has a few grammatical/syntax issues that you may want to address.

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Original Text:
Cloud Longtime Recorder is an Android App for long time audio recording, records can be saved in cloud storage. So, never worry about phone’s memory capacity. It can continue recording day and night, even years long. Records are password protected, no one can play them without the password. This application use Microsoft SkyDrive to storage the records, on the first running, you can register an SkyDrive account, or sign in your SkyDrive if you already have one.

Cloud Longtime Recorder is an Android App for long-time audio recording. Records can be saved in cloud storage.

Never [omitted “so,”] worry about a phone’s memory capacity. It can continue recording for days, even years.

Records are password protected. [Omitted: “no one can play them without the password.”]

This application uses Microsoft SkyDrive to store the records. On the first running, you can register a SkyDrive account or sign in your SkyDrive if you already have one.
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Will my privacy be safe? Yes.First, it need the password to play records. Second, the records are not in your phone, they are in the cloud storage server. Third, the records are not in normal audio format, other software cannot play this audio type. How to purchase?Price: USD 6.42

Will my privacy be safe?

Yes.
First, a password is required to play records.
Second, the records are not even in your phone, they are in the cloud storage server.
Third, the records are not in normal audio format, so other software cannot play this audio type.

How much does it cost?

USD $6.42

And lastly, in the title “Cloud longtime recorder
Audio recorder for Android”, capitalize important words:

Cloud Longtime Recorder
Audio Recorder for Android

[Addition]: Two more things:
Case 5: Three years ago, can you remember?
Case 5: It was three years ago. Can you remember?

I would get rid of Case 2 all together. It violates the parallelism of the question-themed titles for every other case and there are many grammatical errors in it.

@dxs has already addressed some obvious errors, with patience to correct it! You have some great ideas, and definitely a good foundation to build on. A few suggestions, easy fixes: text appears shaky at times, and should use vector format to avoid such appearance. eps instead of jpg. Another detail missing is YOUR contact info, even if its only the website. It should be obvious on every page, and the link listed along the bottom, functional. You want the surfer landing on your page not to forget the company name! One final thought is to add some personality to the functionality. Your “welcome” page could thank people for looking at the site, or begin with a problem your company can solve. Engage your surfer, as you only get seconds to grab their attention! For example, “Have you ever been recording a special event, and right when your child sings (or the groom kisses the bride etc) you run out of recording time… you have a phone fail! That never has to happen again with CLOUD LONGTIME RECORDER! It’s easy to use, to the point and affordable!” (the end. You get the idea). Additionally, your contact page would be inviting with a sentence or two that encourages your potential customer to contact you with any questions or feedback: “We love to hear from our customers! Please feel free to contact us with any questions or suggestions! We love feedback! ”. Thanks for visiting Cloud Longtime Recording. com aka CLR . —Good start… keep on truckin!

Thankfully, @dxs and @LiLu have done a good job of addressing your text, except that EPS isn’t appropriate for Web images. I know of no browser that supports Encapsulated Post Script. Your options are to get good enough at CSS to layer real ASCII text in over background images (best, because search spiders eyes can “read” ascii text but not text rendered into images) or create the text in a lossless format like Photoshop PSD, Adobe Illustrator or Corel PaintShop Pro with anti-aliasing turned on, then save it as a GIF file. JPEG is a lossy format that produces artifacting around abrupt changes in colors, as those between text and its background. GIF is lossless.

My biggest concern with the design is its concept. It’s a great product. Too bad Nixon didn’t have one. ~ But when I land on the page, I have no idea what it does without reading.

Internet user research shows you have to sell your visitor on the idea you have what they are looking for in 50 milliseconds (one twentieth of a second), or most will eventually leave the page. There is no time for reading in 50 milliseconds. The graphics alone must tell the story.

Second, there needs to be at least one and preferably several strong Calls to Action above the scroll line. Don’t count on users scrolling down and finding what to do next, or reading and figuring out what link to click. Really motivated ones might do that, but most will not. Make it glaringly obvious what to click to Buy One and what to click to Learn More. Every call to action should lead to a Conversion Funnel.

Consider another Call to Action in some sort of special offer. Perhaps a way to qualify for free shipping (like us on Facebook or Follow us on Twitter?). Maybe “Save while our brief introductory discount lasts.”. Any of these need to lead to their own conversion funnel.

Good luck with it.

i wish i could award a thousand great questions for this. it is the most cleverly placed spam i’ve seen in a long time. well done!

Thanks for you all, your answers help me a lot. I’ve made some corrections .. I’m not spaming.